After reading the peer evaluations, I have learned that I did provide enough evidence and presented it sufficiently. I was glad that I presented my speech to the audience in a clear manner and had an audible tone so that people could comprehend what I was trying to say. The point that I was trying to convey and my opinions seemed logical and easy to follow to the audience which was essential for a persuasive speech. I also learned that my speech was convincing and that the topic was relevant and also important to the people in KIS.
The improvements that I shall work on in my future speeches is that I should not move around a lot as my gestures will distract the audience. If I move too much and have objects that are distracting to the audience, the audience would not get a better grasp of what I was trying to say in my speech. But overall, after reading my peer evaluations, I thought that I got my point across and the things I need to improve for the future is less usage of gestures.
Lydia Ahn
HaJung Kim
Kevin Lee
Jenny Lee
Sam Lee
Jason Park
Leah Park
Mady Flores
Phillip Song
Jenice Lee
Samuel Yang
Edward Cho
Self Evaluation:
After reading the peer evaluations, I have learned that I did provide enough evidence and presented it sufficiently. I was glad that I presented my speech to the audience in a clear manner and had an audible tone so that people could comprehend what I was trying to say. The point that I was trying to convey and my opinions seemed logical and easy to follow to the audience which was essential for a persuasive speech. I also learned that my speech was convincing and that the topic was relevant and also important to the people in KIS.
The improvements that I shall work on in my future speeches is that I should not move around a lot as my gestures will distract the audience. If I move too much and have objects that are distracting to the audience, the audience would not get a better grasp of what I was trying to say in my speech. But overall, after reading my peer evaluations, I thought that I got my point across and the things I need to improve for the future is less usage of gestures.